Potential changes

After talking to the Big D about my trailer today i have come up with a series of potential changes to make:

• i want to add a few more effects to the middle section and change around the writing parts because im not too keen on how they look,
• The end bit needs a little bit of tidying up so it runs a bit smoother,
• i am going to change the music over the end bit so its not so piecey
• the additional shot i put at the start of the trailer, i will move to the end where i think it wuill fit a lot better.

I will have a play around with these changes opver the next couple of weeks and update the bloge if i change anything. At some point Mr.Dowson will have a quiick look at my drafts and see what he thinks of them, after that i'll have a look at changing parts of them.